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January 7, 2013
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Release your fursona by PuppyBroAustin Release your fursona by PuppyBroAustin
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Here's the finished version of my Persona3 pic ^^
I really love how this came out. Especially Austin's face owo

Note: No this isn't a suicide pic, so don't say it is. It's based off a video game called Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 3
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OK! This is my first Critique ever so bare with me X'D

I'll start with the positive things about the picture.

First off. Originality~! I never seen a picture with the same concept. It's very unique and original. Bravo~! For the most part your proportions are pretty well for a few minor things which I shall explain now~

The downsides of this picture.
For the most part the proportions are pretty well besides a few things. His right arm looks a little off. It kinda looks like like just a nub. The neck is pretty good in width and length but I suggest giving it a little curve not to much though or he'll look to girly. Last but no least the coloring looks kinda lazy and that you just scribbled it. When you color again with colored pencils grab a piece of tissue, toilet paper, and or a old piece of fabric and use it and blend the colored pencil. It will make it look smoother and you wont have to color as much :3

Overall its an amazing piece~ Keep up the good work hopefully this helps ><'
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Subvention Feb 24, 2014  Student Writer
LOL saw it, thought is was a suicide pic, read the description, LOLed to myself, then wrote this...
Komi-Kitsune Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Ive only looked into the Persona 4 story. Its funny how in P3 they used a gun of some sort, and in P4 they just break some card, while having to wear some glasses, in a TV. Pretty interesting to me.

Anyways, great pic!
PuppyBroAustin Jun 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha thank you ^w^

P3 is pretty interesting with the use of evokers, but it has that darker undertone with it.

p4 i've never been able to actually play, but I've seen gameplay and it seems pretty sweet although much harder than p3
xXLostPaintingsOx Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmmmm wow lil bro this is an interesting concept i really like it!
PuppyBroAustin Jan 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You really do? owo
Thanks big bro! *hugs*
xXLostPaintingsOx Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no prob lil bro
ZWolfArt Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're getting alot better
PuppyBroAustin Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank ya :)
Zeta-Haru Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Fus...Ro...Dah! *Bang* XD just kidding :p
Nice draw!! :la: what's the meaning of those words in the gun? :o
PuppyBroAustin Jan 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
... :iconkyonfacepalmplz:

Thanks! X3
S.E.E.S. stands for Special Extracurricular Execution Squad :3
If you play persona 3 you'll understand. Haha
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